Our Galaxy

Here is the other poem. I wrote it a year ago. It is about the galaxy and its very good. Hope you enjoy it and hope to get feedback on the poem in the comments below!

Our Milky Way is beautiful.

Comets and asteroids racing each other like race cars,

And the three Sun, Star and Moon sharing as we should

                     This is our Milky Way.

                      As endless as the ocean, 

                     And as dazzling as diamonds,

Enjoyed and loved by scientists,

but not totally  discovered.

                     As cold as the north pole, 

                   

                    And as old as Mother Nature.

Stars making wishes come true.